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*Flash-Fic-Month FFM 22 - slowly catching up.

I wish I could keep 'em shorter. Mebbe tomorrow.
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:iconmoondrunk:
!moondrunk Aug 19, 2010   Writer
I enjoy you immensely Salshep and am really glad to have met you. You're rare. You sparkle. And I think the world of you.
Just wanted to let you know that.
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ahaha. xD this was so fun. i'm so glad you explained to me what FFM is. i usually can't stay for anything longer than my usual on dA, but this was a total blast. i love your consistently insulting narration of the vintage shop lady.
my favorite: "I want that motley-garbed hippo to wedge the stool out of her ass, waddle over here and ask me if I need any help. This is now my life's purpose."

I actually enjoy vintage stores, so the way the two characters treat the store is too much fun. i love that they're rich and compulsively creative. xD originality and realism, hey, fancy that. you're a writer. i wish i knew how to do funny, but this gives me some hope reminding me that funny is a lot of things.
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*jamberry-song Jul 25, 2010  Professional General Artist
Hahahahahha! The narrator's tone and vocabulary were spot-on perfect in this one. Kudos!
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~simeberg Jul 25, 2010  Professional Filmographer
If they're so rich, why do they have to share a computer?

No, joking. This is really cool. Very funny. Vivid. Nice.
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~Sneakysnafu Jul 25, 2010   General Artist
lol, I like this one
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~Sperpy Jul 25, 2010  Hobbyist
Very nice, I enjoyed this a lot!
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"$1.35-a-box cereal, which tastes like the company has simply filled the box with other, more shredded boxes." is god damn hilarious. This story is rockin'.
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~Masqued-Mistress Jul 25, 2010  Student General Artist
LOL! This is hilarious, I love it! :+favlove:
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